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Comments on Two Meetings in Neutral Territory

Number of comments: 11

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From: akamine_chan (akaminechan@gmail.com)
Date: 01/04/2008
Oh, what a great story. "Maybe Ray would even get a replacement Kowalski. The irony there would be pretty fucking thick, but it wouldn't be like he'd get a choice in the matter."

That line cracked me up. The rest of the story, though. Oh, my. The bitterness, the fear, the hope. This story said so much by saying so little, which is so impressive. Great job of writing!

From: belmanoir (belmanoir@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2008
I meant to comment on this a couple days ago and forgot, so...

Yay, this is so awesome! I love how much Vecchio CARES, and how he just CANNOT say it, but it's so blindingly obvious that Kowalski figures it out anyway. And I LOVE that Vecchio hears Fraser's voice. I'm sure you would, after working with him for so long.
From: slidellra
Date: 12/31/2007
Oh, yay! I am completely intrigued by the premise here, and absolutely delighted by the way these two interact. Fabulous!
From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/30/2007
oh, this is a GREAT scene between the two of them. and I LOVE the image at the end, of the snow and Vecchio leaning against the car. Great story.
From: viciouscats
Date: 12/29/2007
Oh god, this is awesome. Just perfect. Those boys! *clutches fic to heart*
From: anon
Date: 12/27/2007
This was fantastic! I loved it!
From: Iggy (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
This is fabulous -- hot and angsty and subtle. I loved it!
From: sage
Date: 12/26/2007
yay! yay boys! I loved this so much. :)
From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Boy oh boy, this was a gorgeous read. One of those that tug at your heart strings, real gently. Loved your Vecchio, loved Fraser being there at the back of his mind, *loved* the way the Rays come together in the end.
From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Ooh, I liked this one - a really nice bit of scene-setting, deftly done.
From: Susan (aerye.lj@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2007
This story is made of *so* *much* *win* I cannot even begin to express it.

Thank you so much! This is just utterly marvelous and perfect! Vecchio! My woobie Vecchio! I love the way he races to Kowalski when he gets the note, and the voice of Fraser in his head, and the way Kowalski has a glass of wine waiting for him. And the way Vecchio edits everything he says in his head and the way he *doesn't want Kowalski to go* and how he can't say that flat out *BUT KOWALSKI HEARS IT ANYWAY*.

This may be the very best present I've received this year. You are *awesome*.

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