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Comments on Hanging On

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From: malnpudl
Date: 01/14/2008
Forgive me for being brief; I'm having an inarticulate day. But this made me enormously happy. So very much love.
From: Iggy
Date: 01/04/2008
Beautiful and *very* hot. You totally rock for writing these stories!
From: akite (akite68163@aol.com)
Date: 01/01/2008
Yay! A sequel! A sequel even more lovely than the first story. Oh, and hot too. *fans self*
From: keerawa (keerawa@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/31/2007
Oh, that is lovely.

The rejection that first night hurt. THe momet where Ray thought that he was really good at loving, and really bad at stopping, I thought, "Yes, that;s Ray!" And Fraser, takinga leap at the biggest, deadliest chasms around, "Yes, that's Fraser."

This sentence just tugged on my heart-strings. "But this part, the part where Ray got to strip off his job and his tough-guy act and his cynicism, quick as pulling off his clothes, and just be Ray--this part he'd never been able to share with Fraser before." Tears in my eyes, yep.

Great job!
From: Leyna (leyna55@ozemail.com.au)
Date: 12/31/2007
Sweet, and very hot! Plus, potential hypothermia and naked snuggling - a very welcome addition to canon *g*
From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/30/2007
Oh, yum! The angst makes the perfect foil for the guh hotness, and I will never get tired of reading the sharing body heat scenario, I will not ever. And it will all be happily ever after! Heart heart hearts!
From: sage
Date: 12/29/2007
awww, yay! they have the best happily ever after. :D
From: Queue (keeyoo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/27/2007
(1) Santa, you rock, and Sprat deserves every word of your generous gift.

(2) ...now that I've said that, I'll be over here in my bunk. nnnnrrrrgh.
From: viciouscats
Date: 12/26/2007
Aww, this is lovely. :)
From: Sprat (sprat75@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Awwwwwwwww! Okay, I finally got a chance to read this, and man, I'm all squirmy with the sweetness and the HOTness and the Ray+FraserForeverness of it. I love Ray's uncertainty, here -- it's that same raw vulnerability that was so evident in CotW and it makes me <3 him so much it's almost PAINFUL. And guh, Fraser wanting him like CRAZY, but still too scared to own up and ask for it...thank Christ Ray's willing to make him. *happy sigh*

This was fantastic, and just the kind of thing I wanted to read tonight, too. Thank you so much for writing it for me.
From: Sprat (sprat75@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Dear Santa,

I can't believe someone (two someones?) was awesome enough to write me not one but TWO stories of my very own this year. When I saw the notification that this had been uploaded, I actually got all verklempt and sat beaming at my computer's screen for a moment. <3 <3

I still haven't had time to sit and read this one, seeing as it's so lovely and long (eeeee!), but later on today, when the relatives have gone and I finally get some alone time, I am going to come back and have a fic-reading FESTIVAL, and this is at the top of my list.

Until then, THANK YOU for writing this for me, whoever you are! I can't wait to read it.

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