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Comments on Wolf Voyeur

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From: JAJA (jaja@up4kinfo11.info)
Date: 09/13/2008
JAJA, UPYACHKA! UG NE PROIDET, BLYA!
From: SDWolfpup
Date: 01/17/2008
That was great, and had some really fantastic lines. I like Ray chastising Dief about not deserving donuts, and Dief pretending to be blind. Hee.
From: akamine_chan (akaminechan@gmail.com)
Date: 01/03/2008
Oh, I loved Benny very carefully and concisely explaining to Ray why they had to mate for Dief's benefit. And sniffing at Ray's neck. Two guys playing "wolf" so the wolf would stop mating with strange dogs in the street.

What a sweet and dorktastic story!

From: Ande (andeinmn@aol.com)
Date: 12/29/2007
Bwahahahaha! I *so* know who wrote this! Very sneaky Fraser and Ray certainly seemed willing, didn't he? Guess we know who the true alpha is!

From: spuffyduds (spuffyduds@gmail.com)
Date: 12/29/2007
Oh, Fraser, tsk, pretending it's all about Dief. Hee! That's such a sweet, sneaky Fraser thing to do.

Do wolves actually get STUCK? For real? *clings gratefully to humanity*
From: leda_speaks
Date: 12/26/2007
Ha! I can totally see Fraser doing this! Very cute!
From: Nikki (nakeisha@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2007
Ooh, Benny educating and banter and love and sex!

This was so well done.

Educational stories can sometimes seem bland and sterile, but this wasn't at all. Quite the opposite. I was really caught up in the whole explanation, and I could picture and hear Benny all the way through it.

Ditto the sex could have, given the supposed reason for it (sneaky Benny) clinical - it wasn't at all. But then it wasn't just sex it was lovemaking.

And you summed everything that Ray and Benny are up in this line: '"Mating isn't just sex, Ray. It's emotional as much as physical."'

It says it all. It really does.
From: ifreet
Date: 12/25/2007
Hee. Benny's idea of a proposition is certainly unique!

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