From: SDWolfpup
Date: 01/18/2008 |
ohmyGOD I LOVED this. Funny and so hot and entirely awesome.
- "You got extra bullets? We're going in through the front door."
"Again?" Vecchio asked sadly, as Ray pushed past him.
*dies* That really might be my favorite part, and one of my favorite bits in a fic EVER. Just. *flails*
And Welsh with his "I think I'm all set, here." And the fist-fighting fantasy!
- "Okay, then, if I give you that - and it's a gift, Vecchio, just, FYI." He pointed across the desk at Vecchio, who held up both hands in a gesture of surrender. "I am giving you that, as a gift from me to you
That just *leapt* off the page at me. i could totally hear it.
- what was with these guys and their need to pin him up against things, anyway?
I don't know, but I LOVE IT. hee.
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From: Luzula (luzulae@gmail.com)
Date: 01/14/2008 |
I really enjoyed reading this, and I love the style in which you write Kowalski. Also, it was insanely hot for not containing any actual sex. The vibe between all three of them just zings, and I love all the confusion and cluelessness. The conversation between Kowalski and Vecchio near the end is priceless.
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From: mlyn (emily.mlyn@gmail.com)
Date: 01/13/2008 |
I am ALL for new and fun ways for the three boys to hook up. I love the twist on how they get together (Kowalski being the last to know, grin), and of course, your standard snark and wit throughout. Yay! \0/
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From: akamine_chan (akaminechan@gmail.com)
Date: 01/04/2008 |
I loved RayK being the least clueless of the three of them, the pivot point on which their threesome turns. Well written, good characterization, zippy dialogue and a lot of fun. Great job!
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From: akite (akite68163@aol.com)
Date: 01/02/2008 |
This story is totally made of win. \o/ Laugh out loud funny in spots and so very hot in others. I really enjoyed it.
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From: Nos4a2no9
Date: 12/29/2007 |
Mmmmm, this was a sexy and funny and SEXY story, and I loved the RayK voice here. The fact that the boys can't quite figure things out for themselves (and leave it up to Ray) was pretty hilarious. I loved every bit of this story, and thank you so much for posting. TK is a very lucky fangirl :-)
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From: viciouscats
Date: 12/29/2007 |
That was great. Hot, funny, sweet, you name it. Awesome! \o/
"Ray never did figure out which of the two of them would win, seeing as how he generally came before the fantasy fistfight was over."
This line made me laugh out loud. :)
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From: Dessert First
Date: 12/29/2007 |
Bahaha! This was completely charming and hilarious. And hot. Did I mention hot?
Fraser was giving him this look of pure and overwhelming gratitude. "Ray," he said, all quiet and pleased. "I knew you'd know what to do."
"I didn't -" He didn't, for fuck's sake.
Best. Exchange. Ever.
I adored Ray's confusion, his apparently irresistible charms, and his dogged investigation of the case. This story was just delightful.
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From: zabira
Date: 12/27/2007 |
OH! i believe in this version of them, i really, really do! and i love the ray-voice, and his "detecting" and the confusion and really, everything about this story. but this line? this says it all for me: "here was where it got a little hinky - the three of them had this bizarre history that sort of seemed to exclude, oh, everybody else in the world." yep...that's the OT3, right there. thank you!
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From: Ignaz Wisdom (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
eeeee! This was so hot and so RIGHT! \o/
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From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Aw, this was hot and sweet and funny. I love the Clues, and Ray's apparent total sexay aura that has both Vecchio and Fraser all over him. Yay!
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From: Stars (simplystars@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Okay, I have to say - I don't read much F/K/V, but I'm so glad I read this, because the RayK voice is just utterly *fantastic*. I love the humor, how they're all clueless but trying to figure it all out, and then they do and there is a hot porny reward, yay! \o/ (Plus, you know, any time there's an Elvis Costello title you know you're in for something fabulous!)
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From: J S Cavalcante
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Very clever, funny, and hot. I love both Rays' voices. And all the stealth kissing was the perfect combination of hot and hilarious. So much fun.
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From: Tara Keezer (taralynnk@mac.com)
Date: 12/24/2007 |
Oh my god, I have so much *love* for this fic. You just -- it's so freaking perfect I can't begin to describe how happy this story makes me, right down to:
"Again?" Vecchio asked sadly, as Ray pushed past him.
And the bit where everyone, including Vecchio when he was in Vegas, knew that Fraser wanted to suck Ray's dick from the first time he saw him.
[twirls you]
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