From: Ignaz Wisdom (ignazwisdom@gmail.com)
Date: 01/22/2008 |
GUH, this was amazing. So hot and so sweet, and I love watching Ray as he puts the pieces together. (And Fraser knocking over the table so everyone loses their M&Ms. He'd so do that, wouldn't he?)
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From: Nos4a2no9
Date: 01/13/2008 |
Mmmm, deliciously sexy and wonderful Vecchio voice. I'm really starting to dig F/V right now, and I think it can be directly attributed to fics like this that make their dynamic so fresh and funny and silly. Oh boys! Thanks for writing such a wonderful giftfic!
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From: jadelennox (jadelennox@suberic.net)
Date: 01/11/2008 |
Man, those interludes are HOT. And the conclusion is fantastic.
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From: mergatrude (mergatrude@gmail.com)
Date: 01/09/2008 |
Oh yes! Mildest of bondage *g* but awesome!! And Gardino - SQUEEEEE! I adored the entire poker scene. So sweet and hot and yes, Ray noticing Fraser noticing him, getting the signals, confronting him. Oh, and that kiss in the mudroom! *fans self* So very hot. \o/
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From: SDWolfpup
Date: 01/04/2008 |
Oh my GOD this was AMAZING. I loved loved loved it. So hot (the one hand pressed down on Ray's chest about killed me) and funny (persona au gratin! Hee) and with the wonderful Louis cameo and the great character voices and Ray POV. Wonderful!
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From: Stars (simplystars@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/31/2007 |
*shakes fist* You and your naked Frasers! :D
Seriously, for being not-my-pairing, you really got me. Teh sex was oh so hot (I have to see you! nnnrgh!) but the poker game, with the M&Ms and Gardino actually *wondering* if Fraser did it on purpose, and Kojak and lollipops and Fraser not. getting. it. HEE! And the bald crack, ha! The humor was just as faboo as the porn.
Damn. You. *g*
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From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/30/2007 |
oh, this is WONDERFUL and perfectly in character and you nailed Vecchio with just the right amount of smoothness with the right around of NOT smoothness, and I LOVE it. The interludes of sex throughout were stunningly hot.
and just - so FUNNY, too:
>>>"One of the things made me think about being a cop," Ray said.
"Was it one of the things made you decide to go bald?" Louie said.
I LOVE that. (eeee! Gardie! cameo!)
and my fucking god, when Ray CALLS Fraser on it? LOVE. and THIS:
>>>But then he could, because Fraser grabbed fistfuls of Ray's shirt with his still-sudsy hands and walked him backwards until they were in the little mudroom, out of sightline of the kitchen door, and kissed him and kissed him, and yeah, now Ray's dick was doing interesting things.
that just totally and completely gets to me, KILLS me, it's so damn sexy, just - wow. This is awesome. I love it.
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From: leda_speaks
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Hee, this is so awesome. Funny and sexy and real and totally and completely *hot*.
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From: Isis (isiscolo@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2007 |
Oh, GUH. Hot and sexy, but actually my favorite bits were the humor, the "persona au gratin" and the Kojak reference ("Was it one of the things made you decide to go bald?") that made me smile a whole lot. Yay!
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From: viciouscats
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Guh. Hot and sweet. Wonderful story!
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From: Greensilver (greensilver@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2007 |
*beams*
I would've loved it for the poker game alone, because hi, you GAVE ME GARDINO JUST LIKE I WANTED OMG \o/ \o/, and the colored m&ms and Fraser knocking over the table = made of win. Just for that alone! But no! You had to go and awesome it up all over the place with the Vecchios and Fraser doing the dishes and watching watching watching and the hot hot blindfolding and and and.
Miiiiine. *g*
I can -hear- them all in this, and it made me laugh out loud all over the place. You rock. Thank you!
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From: joandarck
Date: 12/24/2007 |
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
--When he looked up, though, Fraser was still staring, but at his face this time, and his expression was-Ray couldn't figure it out. Sad? Lonely? Wanting-something, and Ray suddenly got it, or thought he did, and felt like a heel, because here he was bitching about his family to an orphan.--
Can! picture! Emotionally! involved! in! fic! already!
--"Hell, no," Gardino said. "Nice guy, but I'm not playing for M & M's again, Vecchio. You play poker, you should end up happy or pissed off, not fat."--
HEH. That whole subplot with the different-colored m&ms is awesome.
--"Was it one of the things made you decide to go bald?" Louie said.
"Fuck off," Ray said cheerfully, because he had most of Louie's chocolate and could afford to be nice.--
ajksdaklklsdaa;
The whole final kiss and revelation scene is so great, SO GREAT, because when Ray says it's not like he'd wear a sign, I can completely hear him, it's *early* Ray, when the story's set, and early Fraser grabbing him because yes, and it's all totally clear and real, yay!
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