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Comments on Light the sun

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From: primrose (primroseb@gmail.com)
Date: 01/16/2007
Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it. There aren't many (if any) stories where Ray and Ray aren't either sleeping with each other or hating each other. So I thought I'd add that bit in, that woah, they can act like grownups. The first-time aspect was (I think) part of the request, and also because I'm a sucker for romance. *g* Now I have to figure out how to fix the typos. *headdesk*
From: fenlings (fenlings@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/14/2007
This was SO HAPPYING AND YAY. I was actually less happy with the first-time aspect than I was with the blissful domesticity aspect, and everyone was getting along and there was no drama and it was HOMEY and everyone was happy and in character and AWWW! ::hugs fandom::

(There could be SHOUTING. Oh FRASER. HEE.)

Now I have this uncontrollable grin on my face during work.
From: Lucifercircle (Luciferofthecircle@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/08/2007
You have an excellent Ray K voice and I like the inclusion of the Vecchios and the description of the fun time had by all at Maggies. Nice.
From: Amy
Date: 01/04/2007
Aw, this was very sweet. What a nice first time/realization fic. :)
From: riverlight (riverlight82@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006
Oh, lord, I am thrilled—just thrilled to bits with this story. Seriously. This is one of the best dS stories I've read in a while, and that you wrote it for me (with what I suspect was a fairly non-specific and therefore non-helpful prompt!) is just icing on the cake. I love it, all of it: the bickering between Vecchio and Fraser, Stella and Ray still knowing each other after all these years, Fraser and his green salads, Vecchio on the phone with Frannie—god, all of it. This is just amazing. YAY. ::hugs you::
From: Allison (shoemaster@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
Oh man, go Stella, giving them the necessary kick in the pants. I love oblivious Ray, but god that must have been KILLING Fraser. It seems he's going to be handsomely rewarded, though ;)
From: slidellra (slidellra@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
Oh, I love this. I love the slow, easy pace of it and how natural everybody's interactions are. I definitely love imagining Ray dozing on Fraser's shoulder and the comfort they have with each other. Great work!

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