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Comments on Fourth Floor, Dawn

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From: Beth H
Date: 12/30/2006
Oh, this was lovely. Painful and hopeful, all at once.
From: malnpudl (lcbergstrom@cox.net)
Date: 12/26/2006
Oh, wow. This is simply beautiful. Painful and understated and all the voices ring so true and clear. Much love.
From: riverlight (riverlight82@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006
Oh, yay! I *love* epistolary fic, and this is a perfect example of it—you've got the voices down perfectly. Yay yay yay. Fraser is wonderful here, and much as I'd like to pretend otherwise, this is quite plausible. I love the ending, too; resolved-yet-not; it works perfectly here. Bravo!
From: sam80853 (sam80853@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2006
Ouch! OMG! Fraser is so stupid ... *sighs* ... Heartbreaking with a flicker of hope at the end, great!
From: etben (et.ben.non@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006
oh, FRASER. this is perfect - slow and hesitant and aching, all half-told and understated and did I mention perfect? it's totally perfect, even if it does make me go *merblewerble*
From: china_shop (deafhalfwolf@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Yayayayayaye! This is WONDERFUL!

This is so beautifully poignant and ouchy, and wow, the voices are spot on. I could *hear* Vecchio, in particular. LOVE!

I adore Vecchio being concerned for Kowalski, and Kowalski being persistent and "write back already", and Fraser not knowing how to respond to either of them. And hee, I love Vecchio's "trained seal assassins"! The last line is painfully perfect -- just like picking at a scab. *HEART*

Awwwww, Fraser! *pets his poor isolated self*

Thank you SO MUCH, Santa! Thank you! *flails with glee* Happy holidays to you!

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