From: Petra (petralemaitre@gmail.com)
Date: 08/18/2008 |
I love a threesome/triad story that tells me why each of the pairs clicks as well as it does, and this one has that in spades. Beautiful.
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From: M (emily.mlyn@gmail.com)
Date: 11/15/2007 |
This is hot as hell, and the format is wonderfully innovative. Excellent voices for all three boys. Yay! \0/
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From: spuffyduds (spuffyduds@gmail.com)
Date: 08/06/2007 |
Oh, delicious. The level of detail in the porny dreams, and the YEARNING from all three of them, and this bit from Fraser:
wants to give them everything that is his,
holy COW.
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From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/05/2007 |
I'm becoming all OT3 reading all the good F/V/K going around this year. This was hot, and really well-written - very intense.
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From: lovessong
Date: 01/03/2007 |
This is really hot, and clever, and well-characterized. I enjoyed it a lot.
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From: Lucifercircle (luciferofthecircle@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
This is very hot. You have captured all three of their personalities excellently and i can really see them felling and thinking this way.
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From: Isis (isis@arithmancy.net)
Date: 12/27/2006 |
This is wonderful. I have a hard time with threesome fic that isn't PWP, because I have a hard time believing in a perfectly-functioning triad of these guys, but using the fantasy/dream device works beautifully here to make it all seem possible and plausible and utterly desirable.
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From: Sage (sageness@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
God, this is gorgeous. I love how the different points of view and dreams fit together so well. And I love seeing them want like this, where it's a slow and steady unfolding. :D
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From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
OMG, you wrote me THREESOME FIC! I cannot TELL you how much love I have for you at this very moment. And holy god, Ray Kowalski's dirty, dirty thoughts? Are how my mind works all the time. I'm so happy with this I could die from it.
Every time Ray glances back to say something, he's sure he'll see Fraser's hand on Vecchio's shoulder, pinning him against the seat as Fraser bites at his neck, just below the collar of his shirt. Vecchio would moan and twist, gritting his teeth, but then he'd just relax, melt into the seat, let Fraser do whatever he wanted.
that's one of the hottest images ever in the whole goddamn world.
And this:
Over dinner, though, he figures out the rest of it: Vecchio and Fraser are close, close in a way that has nothing to do with hands and dicks and bodies and everything to do with love and trust and partnership, with being so close to someone that you know what they're going to say before they even get there to say it. They're a duet, playing off each other, back and forth, sharing history and stories and the solid, steady weight of friendship.
is the description of what's there between Fraser and Vecchio that I have ever, ever seen. I'm in AWE.
And this:
ay doesn't listen, though, just holds Kowalski steady with one hand on the back of his neck, one hand on his hip, and kisses him hard and fast. Kowalski falls right into it, of course, and soon he's the one in charge, pushing Ray over to the couch and landing on top of him, one hand already reaching for the front of Ray's pants.
I am FOR Vecchio's hot, hot imagination, because them making out on the couch together while Fraser watches is SCORCHING.
"You want this, Frase?" Kowalski's using his sex voice, the one that's hoarse and aching and makes it sound like he's been blowing someone in a dirty alley, the one that would be guaranteed to get Ray going if he weren't more than halfway there already, and Fraser shakes, this full-body tremor that ends with him pressed even tighter against the wall.
nrrrrrrrrgh. Seriously, can it GET better than that? You have dirty, slutty, fucking HOT Kowalski down to a T.
and as much as I TOTALLY LOVE the porn, it's the quiet, intimate domesticity here that makes me want squish both of them together:
In return, Ray Kowalski remembers things about Ray Vecchio, slivers and snippets of information, and spreads them out as the dinner progresses - exactly the right amount of wine, here, and a refill before Ray asks for it; seconds of lasagna but no extra sauce, a glass of water when the wine is gone.
or all three of them, really, since Fraser is the one noticing all of these things. And this:
Ray and Ray work well together, rough edges lending traction, the endless back-and-forth of insults just another way of encoding affection and appreciation.
god, I fucking LOVE that. That is SO VERY THEM, man, all rough edges and tough words and LOVE. And here:
They are two of the best people he knows; he couldn't want more for them than each other.
oh, woobie, WOOBIE Fraser, I love you so. He WOULD be all stoic and supportive and alone, wouldn't he? Poor guy. But! You give him HOPE. And I so, so, so hope he asks.
This was fucking amazing. I LOVE it, and you, and them. Merry Christmas to ME.
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From: blg (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
I have 8 million more things to say when I am more awake, but omfg, I LOVE THIS, and YOU, whoever you are. This KILLED me. omg, SO GOOD. eeeeeeeeeeeeeee! *twirls*
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From: jamethiel_bane (jamethiel_bane@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
This is amazing! To see three people's viewpoints of each other, all individual and distinct and yet all wanting the same thing. Bravo!
(and also, NNNGGGHHH, hot.)
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From: pearl (schmerica@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
Okay, this totally wins! I've been a hard sell on F/K/V when it starts from a Ray/Ray place, but this totally completely worked for me.
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