From: Fredericks (fredericks@livejournal.com)
Date: 06/15/2008 |
That was a great read. Fraser's frazzled state by Day Eight was HI-larious. Also hilarious? That his yelling at Bob and conversing with Dief was actually quite sane for him. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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From: Dessert First
Date: 01/11/2008 |
Wow, such a wonderful story. Here via recsredux, and I'm so happy this got recced again, because I got to reread it. Your characterization of Fraser, the two-by-four in the face of angst when he believes Dief's story, the GENIUS conversations with Dief, happy spring-is-sprung Ray urging Fraser to grab the burger... there is nothing about this story I do not love. Fantastic.
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From: jadelennox (jadelennox@suberic.net)
Date: 01/09/2008 |
BWAHAHAHA! I am laughing too hard to point out all the parts of the story I love.
*falls over*
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From: keerawa (keerawa@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/07/2008 |
Dief IS a very bad wolf! I adore this story, just found it again. Fraser showing up at Ray's door, demanding to know if "he" was here now, and than swearing? Brilliant! He's so messed up. And that is some very hot sex at the end. Smart Dief!
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From: Tracy
Date: 12/25/2007 |
Mmm, I love Jealous!Fraser!! <3
I liked the angst in the beginning when Fraser starts to believe Dief in that he missed his chance.
I think you also really captured his personality with how he picked up on "Dan", held it inside for three days until he had to say something to Ray about him - just to see what Ray had to say about this "Dan". ^_^
Great story!
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From: Donna (dmorin@hotmail.com)
Date: 02/25/2007 |
Thank you for posting such a great dS story about how things MIGHT have turned out with these characters! What inspired visuals...
And when one of my students borrowed a stapler I flashed onto the 'I must go staple things' line, though the last one is my favorite.
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From: Berty (bertybertle@yahoo.co.uk)
Date: 02/07/2007 |
Dude! You just made me snort coffee through my NOSE! The Dief and Fraser interaction is priceless. I love this little story - too cute!
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From: brooklinegirl
Date: 02/06/2007 |
Thank you kindly. I'm going to go--staple things now." Fraser set the stapler on the desk and walked off.
dude. I am cracking the fuck up. This is hysterical and HOT and FUNNY and just - god, I am dying with glee. So awesome, and omfg, Fraser is going to KILL Dief. This is just - brilliantly executed.
and it made me want a burger really very bad.
(here via ds_recsredux!)
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From: Chris (theantichris@gmail.com)
Date: 01/14/2007 |
Your dialogue always kills me. This is so exactly how they talk, and it's funny and hurty at the same time, and just LOVE.
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From: Amy
Date: 01/03/2007 |
This was great. Greatness. I love the angst, humor, and smut all rolled into one. :)
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From: lamardeuse (poutinette@canada.com)
Date: 12/28/2006 |
Any story that contains a) pining on Fraser's part, b) a smoking hot blowjob, and c) the phrase, "Dief farted in response" is TOPS in my book. Great work! :)
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From: Alexis
Date: 12/27/2006 |
This was great! It had something for everyone: humor, angst, drama, and fishwife!Fraser. Thanks so much for posting!
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From: Ultra_Chrome
Date: 12/27/2006 |
This is fantabulous! Funny as a thing that is really really funny. And a little hotness at the end to make Fraser feel better.
A great read!
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From: omphale23 (omphale23@gmail.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
This was wonderful--hot and funny and such a great Fraser voice.
"His subconscious was startlingly inventive when it came to the subject of Stanley Raymond Kowalski. He'd never have consciously conceived of using a topiary in such a fashion."
*giggles*
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
That was very funny and well written. Loved the whole idea of Dief's plans. I laughed at the name of the toy poodle! The subheadings are great, too.
A few favourite lines:
He was a Mountie and Mounties didn't mope.
"Grab the burger, Fraser. I'm telling you. *Grab the burger.* You won't be sorry."
Half the fun of teasing Fraser was watching him get defensive and pissy while still maintaining his freakish Canadian politeness.
Then it got even better! I laughed out loud at He'd just shouted and cursed at Ray in the middle of the night, then run off without explanation. And then Fraser's thoughts of how he could explain himself to Ray! *Great* paragraph!
Very entertaining!
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From: J S Cavalcante (JSCavalcante@nycap.rr.com)
Date: 12/26/2006 |
Hee! So much fun! Jealous!Fraser is pretty hot! So was "I'm sorry for what I'm about to do"--and what followed. Great visuals--guh! And I'm with Ray: It was funny. I think he owes Dief a year's worth of doughnuts. :)
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From: Nora Bombay (nbombay@mindspring.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Dief is a very evil dog. Er, half-wolf.
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From: sam80853 (sam80853@gmail.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Awwwww, love-sick puppy Fraser is the best!
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From: Allison (shoemaster@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Oh man, jealous fishwife tourrett's Fraser. *heart* And poor confused Ray. And that was a very tricky thing Dief did, but you can't be against the results :D
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From: jamethiel_bane (jamethiel_bane@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
YAY!!!
Thank you so MUCH, mystery person! I adored this! I love Dief being smarter than the humans, Ray being (mostly) oblivious, and Fraser using his own weirdness to cover his growing obsession. Angst, hot and sweet, all in the one fic-- the perfect recipe.
YAY!!
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