From: Petra
Date: 09/07/2008 |
The backwards nature of this story -- touching in intimate ways, then flirting, or acknowledging that it was -- is beautifully them. This story makes me grin.
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Date: 03/25/2008 |
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From: belmanoir (belmanoir@gmail.com)
Date: 01/01/2008 |
this is so adorable! fraser is such a dork.
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From: Heather (hgladney@heather.gladney.net)
Date: 01/01/2008 |
Oh boy, I just love the buildup to that ending para where Ray says, "That's gonna change." Superb. Wonderful stuff!
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From: terrible_tues
Date: 10/11/2007 |
The last conversation left me smiling. Thanks.
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From: china_shop
Date: 09/27/2007 |
"Finally, the little light bulb above Ray's head lit up. Fraser must be interested, what with the full frontal massage and other subtle clues. He thought it over for a good one or two seconds and decided he was interested right back."
Heee! Oh, Ray! So thoughtful! *g*
"Jesus. Shut up, Fraser. I just want you to put out or stop feeling me up. This halfway thing makes me nuts."
And this, too! So much love. I never got around to feedbacking this before -- sorry! But wow, just reread, and I have so much love for it! ♥♥♥
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From: Eystri
Date: 09/27/2007 |
Yeah, I'm not gonna lie. The end made me squirm on my bed and squeal into my pillow. Guh.
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From: Celli
Date: 09/27/2007 |
I love all of this, but my favorite line is definitely "So, no danger of Ray getting lucky any time soon." Oh, Ray. :)
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From: bluebrocade (asjbg_chick@yahoo.com)
Date: 01/10/2007 |
Fabulous story! I love the idea. You totally *get* Fraser. Him offering to bring reading material on feminism to the jail -- *so* something he would do. Loved this!
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From: tally
Date: 01/08/2007 |
ha! i love the premise: fraser doesn't even realize that he's feeling ray up. very cute, hot, and funny. -- tally
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From: exeterlinden (exeterlinden@hotmail.com)
Date: 01/05/2007 |
Hahaha, this was crackalicious! Great snarky, snappy Ray-voice, clueless backwards Fraser, bizarre cases - and topped off with a *hot* messy & awkward blowjob. Yum!
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From: brooklinegirl (brooklinegirl@rcn.com)
Date: 01/01/2007 |
oh, man, this was hot and funny and clever, and the sex was totally nrrrrrrrrrrgh and I LOVED how clueless - totally, deeply clueless - Fraser very honestly was. I laughed out loud several times reading it. and - again - seriously hot, desperate, awkward sex for the win. YAY.
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From: Icarion
Date: 01/01/2007 |
Oh that is absolutely brilliant :D Hilarious, hot, fantastic!
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From: tharaist
Date: 12/30/2006 |
Very nice! Loved the whole touching while not aware thing and structure of the fic was great.
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From: Beth H
Date: 12/30/2006 |
*Very* smart. I love how disassociated Fraser's brain is from the wants and needs of his body. Lovely work.
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From: Isis (isis@arithmancy.net)
Date: 12/28/2006 |
Heh, the same wacky feel as the show.
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From: lamardeuse (poutinette@canada.com)
Date: 12/27/2006 |
This was all kinds of fun! I could see Fraser sublimating his own desires to the point where he wasn't sure he was groping Ray. Nicely done. :)
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From: Zebra (zebra363@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/27/2006 |
Very funny, and I loved your use of quotes from the show as subheadings.
Particular favourites: the Kiss Rebuff of '97, the personal space moat, and "I suspect you're displacing your natural anxiety for your safety onto this irrational paranoia about your person."
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From: Nora Bombay (nbombay@mindspring.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Dief lying. Dief Lying. I love it.
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From: Cathy (squickgrrl@yahoo.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
omigod, I can't EVEN. This story is just so perfect, from Ray and Fraser and Dief to the insanely bizarre cases they're working on. and, GUH, the end. LOVE IT. LOVE THIS STORY. LOVE YOU!!! Thank you so much!
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From: J S Cavalcante (JSCavalcante@nycap.rr.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Just perfection--so DS! SO THEM. Laugh-out-loud funny and sweetly hot, and it even has a terrific punchline. Superb!
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From: Sage (sageness@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Awwww! I enjoyed this so much. I love the madcap groping during shootouts and Fraser's stubborn denial. And Ray catching Dief lying? So funny! :D
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From: Allison (shoemaster@livejournal.com)
Date: 12/25/2006 |
Oh, that was funny and hot. And really funny and really hot. Of course Fraser is so repressed that he's copping feels unconsciously, and Ray trying to call him on it... And then the awkward blow job at the end. Love the final line.
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From: pearl (schmerica@gmail.com)
Date: 12/24/2006 |
This made me shriek with laughter; it is both hilarious and *perfect*.
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